I'll do something new, 1-2 days before I publish a new chapter, I'll put a notification with its name, and whenever I put these notifications this means that a new chapter is coming.
I also intended not to partition chapters anymore, I'll just keep chapters short to 2-3 pages at most, yes the full story may exceed 100 or more chapters but I promise that every single one of them will be short :)
Keep tuned for the next chapter :)
Friday, April 20, 2007
Tuesday, April 17, 2007
Chapter 2: The Mission
On the top of a high hill, a soldier was approaching and a very muscular man was having his daily training
-Anam, hurry up, the head of priests needs you now.
-Is it urgent? You know that it's the time now for my daily training.
-Yeah, it’s very urgent, he told me to bring you right now!
-Ok, I’ll be on my way.
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-Set down Anam, I’ve a very critical mission for you, a mission on which the future of the whole planet depends on.
-To this extent Sir?
-I am afraid that the answer is Yes Anam, we’re facing a very serious danger, a danger which could destroy all our civilization and changes the whole future.
-I am all ears sir.
-Do you remember this far land of Atlantis? And how their civilization was far away behead of us?
-Yes sir I remember, their civilization is very advanced, but what happened? Did they discover any thing that could harm us?
-I am afraid that they are the "thing" the could harm us Anam!
-What?! Excuse me sir, but I thought that we’re friends and we’re not enemies.
-Yes Anam, but since they had their new emperor everything start changing, he believes that a nation like their nation must have control over the whole planet in addition to many other planets, our Atlantic friend Zorn told us all this information, he told us that the new emperor is leading the whole planet to a disaster, we must stop him Anam, I know that you’re the best we’ve got, and since this mission is really dangerous, I am not forcing you to do it, please if you feel like not doing it, tell me now.
-Sir, you know that I’d never ever refuse a mission whatever the danger is, I accept the mission sir, and I’ll stop them and protect the whole planet sir.
-That’s what I thought you’ll be doing Anam, I’ll send you with 20 men of our best, you’ll leave at dawn, our friend Zorn will meet you in a place I’ll tell you, don’t tell anyone about the mission until you arrive there, this is a very confidential information, when you meet with Zorn he’ll feed you with all the information you need to do your mission.
-I’ll do it sir.
-Ok Anam, you can leave now to prepare yourself for this mission, wish you the best of luck.
-Thank you sir.
To be continued.....
-Anam, hurry up, the head of priests needs you now.
-Is it urgent? You know that it's the time now for my daily training.
-Yeah, it’s very urgent, he told me to bring you right now!
-Ok, I’ll be on my way.
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-Set down Anam, I’ve a very critical mission for you, a mission on which the future of the whole planet depends on.
-To this extent Sir?
-I am afraid that the answer is Yes Anam, we’re facing a very serious danger, a danger which could destroy all our civilization and changes the whole future.
-I am all ears sir.
-Do you remember this far land of Atlantis? And how their civilization was far away behead of us?
-Yes sir I remember, their civilization is very advanced, but what happened? Did they discover any thing that could harm us?
-I am afraid that they are the "thing" the could harm us Anam!
-What?! Excuse me sir, but I thought that we’re friends and we’re not enemies.
-Yes Anam, but since they had their new emperor everything start changing, he believes that a nation like their nation must have control over the whole planet in addition to many other planets, our Atlantic friend Zorn told us all this information, he told us that the new emperor is leading the whole planet to a disaster, we must stop him Anam, I know that you’re the best we’ve got, and since this mission is really dangerous, I am not forcing you to do it, please if you feel like not doing it, tell me now.
-Sir, you know that I’d never ever refuse a mission whatever the danger is, I accept the mission sir, and I’ll stop them and protect the whole planet sir.
-That’s what I thought you’ll be doing Anam, I’ll send you with 20 men of our best, you’ll leave at dawn, our friend Zorn will meet you in a place I’ll tell you, don’t tell anyone about the mission until you arrive there, this is a very confidential information, when you meet with Zorn he’ll feed you with all the information you need to do your mission.
-I’ll do it sir.
-Ok Anam, you can leave now to prepare yourself for this mission, wish you the best of luck.
-Thank you sir.
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To be continued.....
Chapter 1-Part 2: Surprise!
-“So let’s try to focus guys and make sure we’re not dreaming!” Sarah said that while she was walking in their room like hell.
-So according to the first page in this book dragons did exist!
-Yeah Adam, but we don’t know any details yet, why we don’t just set down and start reading in the book? I know it’s really huge, but we must read it!
-You’re right Sarah, you begin and I’ll be listening with Adam.
After that Sarah opened the first page and start reading:
“Our story starts one day during our most glorious days, there was a very great worrier whose name is Anam-Amon-Sha, he’s the best worrier in the whole history, no one ever succeeded in defeating him, and he’s an army by his own.
One day….”
To be continued.....
Sunday, April 15, 2007
Chapter 1-Part 1: Surprise!
In the near future not so far from now, the sun was rising over a scene in the Egyptian Western desert in which a view of many people who were digging in the sands and searching for something, as the camera approaches the scene, we begin to understand what’s going on.
There were 3 scientists in addition to many workers, our focus will go on the 3 scientists:
Dr. Sarah:
An American female scientist whose speciality is Egyptology, she’s only 26 years old, she got her first PhD when she was only 22 years old, she’s pretty with very soft red hair, very pure blue eyes, she’s an Aikido master who holds a Yondon (forth degree black belt), she’ll be one of our main characters in the whole story.
Dr. Adam:
Is an American scientist as well, he’s in love with Sarah since their early days in college, but she just consider him as a friend.
Dr. Adrian:
He’s the only French professor in the group.
Sarah: Oh my god, finally after 8 months of searching for this tomb we found it!
Adam: Yeah, after 8 months of being annoyed by you!
Sarah (being angry): Me?!! Me being annoying?!! You forgot who's the one who waked us all at the middle of the night with this weird idea and just left without even discussing it?!
Adam: And you forgot who the one who was usually sad and was fighting with everyone that we’re not working well and that we need to do more work?!
Adrian: Whoa, guys, calm down, forget all about these, the important thing here that we’re finally there, please stop all this shit and let’s go to view the tomb, this is the important thing right now!
Sarah: You’re right, let’s not to waste our time fighting, let’s go do some work.
And then the three went to the place they find the tomb, and they start looking into the writing over the door of the tomb.
Sarah: What’s this?!!
Adrian: This is really strange, I can see hieroglyphs, but some of them don’t make any sense, and they have no specific meaning!
Adam: Hey guys, look at this!
Adrian: And what the hell is this?! Is this a drawing of a dragon?!
Sarah: Oh my God, and what about this drawing on the left?! It looks like an aircraft, a weird one, but it’s definitely an aircraft!
Adrian: Let’s open the door and search for more answers.
Adam: I can’t see any way of how to unlock this door except with adding some explosives, the tomb door and walls are built from some kind of metal which I can’t identify, let’s try using hammers first.
Few minutes later......
Sarah: I am tired, we’re trying to open it for the last 30 minutes but in vain!
Adam: Hey guys, come and take a look of what I’ve found on the back side of the tomb!
Sarah: what’s this?! It looks like a hand print reader, this can’t be true!
After that, Sarah went and tried to touch this strange part of the tomb, and suddenly few moments after she touched it, the tomb door is opened
Adrian: Guys, I am getting frightened, everything is very strange, this is definitely not our normal Egyptian tomb, there’s something strange about it!
Sarah: You’re right, and even in its contents too!!
Adam: What did you find guys?
Sarah: where were you Adam?
Adam: I was just peeing, what did you find?
Adrian: The contents are really strange, there’s only this box and this strange thing which looks like a coffin, but it’s so strange!
Sarah: I found this book inside the box, it’s huge, I never saw a book like this before!
Adam: What does it say?
Sarah: from the writings on the first page, it’s saying: “The truth about ….” Oh my god, oh my god, this can’t be true, Oh my god we’ll be so famous, did you read what I’ve just read?
Adam: YES, I can’t believe myself, the truth about Atlantis?! Ohhh, so it’s true, this is great!
Sarah: Oh my god, do you recognize this creature in the first page?
To be continued….
There were 3 scientists in addition to many workers, our focus will go on the 3 scientists:
Dr. Sarah:
An American female scientist whose speciality is Egyptology, she’s only 26 years old, she got her first PhD when she was only 22 years old, she’s pretty with very soft red hair, very pure blue eyes, she’s an Aikido master who holds a Yondon (forth degree black belt), she’ll be one of our main characters in the whole story.
Dr. Adam:
Is an American scientist as well, he’s in love with Sarah since their early days in college, but she just consider him as a friend.
Dr. Adrian:
He’s the only French professor in the group.
Sarah: Oh my god, finally after 8 months of searching for this tomb we found it!
Adam: Yeah, after 8 months of being annoyed by you!
Sarah (being angry): Me?!! Me being annoying?!! You forgot who's the one who waked us all at the middle of the night with this weird idea and just left without even discussing it?!
Adam: And you forgot who the one who was usually sad and was fighting with everyone that we’re not working well and that we need to do more work?!
Adrian: Whoa, guys, calm down, forget all about these, the important thing here that we’re finally there, please stop all this shit and let’s go to view the tomb, this is the important thing right now!
Sarah: You’re right, let’s not to waste our time fighting, let’s go do some work.
And then the three went to the place they find the tomb, and they start looking into the writing over the door of the tomb.
Sarah: What’s this?!!
Adrian: This is really strange, I can see hieroglyphs, but some of them don’t make any sense, and they have no specific meaning!
Adam: Hey guys, look at this!
Adrian: And what the hell is this?! Is this a drawing of a dragon?!
Sarah: Oh my God, and what about this drawing on the left?! It looks like an aircraft, a weird one, but it’s definitely an aircraft!
Adrian: Let’s open the door and search for more answers.
Adam: I can’t see any way of how to unlock this door except with adding some explosives, the tomb door and walls are built from some kind of metal which I can’t identify, let’s try using hammers first.
Few minutes later......
Sarah: I am tired, we’re trying to open it for the last 30 minutes but in vain!
Adam: Hey guys, come and take a look of what I’ve found on the back side of the tomb!
Sarah: what’s this?! It looks like a hand print reader, this can’t be true!
After that, Sarah went and tried to touch this strange part of the tomb, and suddenly few moments after she touched it, the tomb door is opened
Adrian: Guys, I am getting frightened, everything is very strange, this is definitely not our normal Egyptian tomb, there’s something strange about it!
Sarah: You’re right, and even in its contents too!!
Adam: What did you find guys?
Sarah: where were you Adam?
Adam: I was just peeing, what did you find?
Adrian: The contents are really strange, there’s only this box and this strange thing which looks like a coffin, but it’s so strange!
Sarah: I found this book inside the box, it’s huge, I never saw a book like this before!
Adam: What does it say?
Sarah: from the writings on the first page, it’s saying: “The truth about ….” Oh my god, oh my god, this can’t be true, Oh my god we’ll be so famous, did you read what I’ve just read?
Adam: YES, I can’t believe myself, the truth about Atlantis?! Ohhh, so it’s true, this is great!
Sarah: Oh my god, do you recognize this creature in the first page?
To be continued….
First Story - A call from the past
I'll begin my first story, it's about ......
Let's read to know what's it about :)
Let's read to know what's it about :)
What's it about?
OK, so I think everyone will be asking, why I've created this blog?!
Simple, I've many stories in my mind, so I thought about writing them, then I thought about sharing them, any way I'll be doing every story in a form of chapters, every episode will not only contain the story and the dialogues, but may also include a complete scene description because may be one day I'll change any of them to a video game and so this could come in handy :)
Simple, I've many stories in my mind, so I thought about writing them, then I thought about sharing them, any way I'll be doing every story in a form of chapters, every episode will not only contain the story and the dialogues, but may also include a complete scene description because may be one day I'll change any of them to a video game and so this could come in handy :)
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